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Thursday, August 6, 2015

Poem

I chose this poem because I like reading it and I want to share with everyone else.
The challenging 
part was when we had to think of our own sentences.
I got past the challenge when I remembered that my big brother plays basketball in their school hall.
My favorite part of the poem is the 3rd part.



Crunching ginger biscuits
Is like hearing soldiers tread
I fell down on the floor
And bang my head.


Chewing a marshmallow
Is nowhere near as loud
The cricket team always get fired
Up by the loudness of the crowd


Playing basketball in the hall is like
Playing outside in the splashing waterfall
Falling down and banging my head on
The floor as hard as hitting a cricket ball.

5 comments:

  1. Cool peom Marick keppp it up!!!

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  2. Hey Marick, I really like your piece of poem, Great Work, Keep it up. :))

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  3. Hey Marick!!!! I really like your piece of poem. Keep up the hard work.

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  4. good work keep it up

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    1. I agree with Ronald- I wonder if he's thought about a thoughtful and helpful comment to go with his positives.

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